All about Me Do you want to know about my life? My name is Nico, I’m in fifth grade and I might be just like you. I live in Ventura, California. I go to Saticoy Elementary School. My class room number is room 2. I have the best teachers in the human race! Your probably thinking, "why are they the best teachers in the human race?" They do all kinds of awe-inspiring things. Their names are Mrs. Geib and Mr. Wulff. I almost forgot to tell you about my family. My parents names are Matt and Lillie. My only siblings are Matty and Sophia. My older brother is 17 and my sister is younger then I, she is 8. My dad and mom are the same age, they are 35. My dad works for Pleasant Valley Parks and Recreation District. My mom works at A Secret Place. It is not a secert place! It is called that and it is a hair salon. Yeah, thats right, "lady's and gentlemen head down to the corner of Oak and Main. My brother has his drivers license so, STAY off the road! My little sister is a ballerina and a pain!
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I enjoyed your personal examples and how the words flowed so well in your essay. Thank you for sharing! -- Mrs. Geib
All about Me
Do you want to know about my life? My name is Nico, I’m in fifth grade and I might be just like you. I live in Ventura, California. I go to Saticoy Elementary School. My class room number is room 2. I have the best teachers in the human race! Your probably thinking, "why are they the best teachers in the human race?" They do all kinds of awe-inspiring things. Their names are Mrs. Geib and Mr. Wulff.
I almost forgot to tell you about my family. My parents names are Matt and Lillie. My only siblings are Matty and Sophia. My older brother is 17 and my sister is younger then I, she is 8. My dad and mom are the same age, they are 35. My dad works for Pleasant Valley Parks and Recreation District. My mom works at A Secret Place. It is not a secert place! It is called that and it is a hair salon. Yeah, thats right, "lady's and gentlemen head down to the corner of Oak and Main. My brother has his drivers license so, STAY off the road! My little sister is a ballerina and a pain!
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Students: Give positive feedback/constructive criticism here!
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I enjoyed your personal examples and how the words flowed so well in your essay. Thank you for sharing! -- Mrs. Geib